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  1. joevc says:

    This is wonderful.

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    1. mcfeats says:

      Thank you, Joe.

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  2. M. Höhne says:

    Nice!

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  3. John Cooper says:

    A prose poem. I read such things skeptically, but this beats the vast majority of the poems I read. You challenge the reader just enough to ensure participation. The allusions are rewarding. Well done.

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    1. mcfeats says:

      Thanks, John. I’m not sure what it is, but I want to get back into the habit of doing a little creative writing every day. It does seem like it could be made into a story or reworked as a poem.

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  4. Bill M says:

    I really like it. When I saw the title I thought maybe you found Dr. Polt’s holy grail of typewriters.

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    1. mcfeats says:

      Thanks, Bill. I wasn’t aware there was a Sphinx typewriter.

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