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  1. joevc's avatar joevc says:
    April 21, 2019 at 11:26 pm

    Wonderful! I think the intermittent skips add to the poetic mystery, as do the curvy lines. Well done.

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    1. McFeats's avatar mcfeats says:
      April 21, 2019 at 11:42 pm

      Thank you, Joe. Chess always invites metaphors. I showed part of The Seventh Seal in class the other day.

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  2. McFeats's avatar McFeats says:
    February 26, 2022 at 3:44 am

    Suggested revision if going to use this poem for pub: Let’s cling to this moment/Hold hands and listen/ etc.

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