Stories in the Dark – a poem Posted by McFeats on April 21, 2019 Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Like Loading...
Wonderful! I think the intermittent skips add to the poetic mystery, as do the curvy lines. Well done.
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Thank you, Joe. Chess always invites metaphors. I showed part of The Seventh Seal in class the other day.
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Suggested revision if going to use this poem for pub: Let’s cling to this moment/Hold hands and listen/ etc.
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