Poem in Progress: “Call and Response, Gallup 2020” Posted by McFeats on December 9, 2020December 10, 2020 Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Like Loading...
The Untimely Typewriter:Daily Writings Against the Tides of Distraction 
I like the poem’s evolution. All the arrows and notes makes it look like one of my outlines.
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Very nice! And I love seeing your process revealed through the edits.
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Working on it. I am putting a submission together for Red Mesa Review—for regional writing. In case you want to submit something: https://www.gallup.unm.edu/community/redmesareview.php
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Great imagery and rhythm. And so nice to see the stages of the typescript.
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Thanks, Richard. Can’t seem to stop tweaking this one.
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