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  1. Richard P's avatar Richard P says:
    September 28, 2021 at 11:54 am

    I’m intrigued.

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    1. McFeats's avatar McFeats says:
      September 28, 2021 at 4:03 pm

      Thanks, Richard. Hopefully I can weave enough narratives into it to keep the reader interested.

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  2. joevc's avatar joevc says:
    September 28, 2021 at 1:11 pm

    Yes!

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    1. McFeats's avatar McFeats says:
      September 28, 2021 at 4:03 pm

      Thanks, Joe.

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  3. ivanonthekeys's avatar ivanonthekeys says:
    September 28, 2021 at 9:47 pm

    Nice.

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  4. Bill M's avatar Bill M says:
    September 30, 2021 at 5:50 pm

    I’ve got to catch up on my blog reading. I notices 3 parts and started here. I really like what is developing.

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    1. McFeats's avatar McFeats says:
      September 30, 2021 at 9:15 pm

      Thanks, Bill. I need to outline the structure and motifs. Right now I’m just winging it, but that could lead to uncontrolled repetition. I’d like to find the right constellations to mirror the three characters and then do something with that.

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