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  1. McFeats's avatar McFeats says:
    March 23, 2024 at 7:21 pm

    Line 8: perched over water vats

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  2. McFeats's avatar McFeats says:
    March 23, 2024 at 7:22 pm

    Delete “yelps”

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  3. McFeats's avatar McFeats says:
    March 23, 2024 at 7:24 pm

    Or “over arid vats”? “Dusty vats?”

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