Ideas: Add the SG1, in need of repair, difficult to move. Its relocation and repair become a herculean testament to its symbolic importance. Along with it, he finds paper. Under the paper, he finds a manuscript. The ms. is a creative journal from a woman. He repairs the machine. He begins to write back, Questions: end here or end with his return to the blue house, When he approaches, he finds a woman reclined in the hammock. Story ends.
Thanks, Richard! I thought I’d aim for a story that doesn’t get too specific on a timeline. I didn’t expect to write in first person, but it felt right,
Ideas: Add the SG1, in need of repair, difficult to move. Its relocation and repair become a herculean testament to its symbolic importance. Along with it, he finds paper. Under the paper, he finds a manuscript. The ms. is a creative journal from a woman. He repairs the machine. He begins to write back, Questions: end here or end with his return to the blue house, When he approaches, he finds a woman reclined in the hammock. Story ends.
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The typewriter is in need of a paper guide. He adapts a license plate.
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Very evocative and appealing.
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Thanks, Richard! I thought I’d aim for a story that doesn’t get too specific on a timeline. I didn’t expect to write in first person, but it felt right,
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I love the repetition. This is a beautiful piece. You can really feel the character’s monotony through the everyday.
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Thank you! I’ll have to figure out how to pace the rest of it
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