Variation on Christina’s World (a poem in stages)

I felt like exploring a word palette today. I wanted to break habits of thought and sentence structure. So I began by listing word combinations inspired by my backyard surroundings. After creating the list, I could imagine the possibility of a poem.

What was missing was some central organizing perspective or voice. As I wrote, I began to think of Andrew Wyeth’s painting, Christina’s World. As per usual, I made some basic mistakes in the heat of writing, but I pushed forward without looking back (a strength to writing on a typewriter). First vision; then revision.

I still am not content with the writing. It needs some narrative simplicity around which to organize the abstract use of natural images. The point is that I do not know what the poem is supposed to do yet, making it a sequence of cluttered clauses. First vision; then revision; then rebuild vision. By using a typewriter, handwritten notes, and post-writing reflection (what I am doing in this post), I begin to imagine a synthesized focus for the poem. What I realize is that I need to set this aside for marination. If the poem has a shape to it, it will reveal itself later. No need to rush (as we often do with purely digital writing).

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  1. Bill M's avatar Bill M says:

    Nice hi-tech ergo chair!

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    1. McFeats's avatar mcfeats says:

      It’s quite comfortable.

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      1. Bill M's avatar Bill M says:

        It is Eco friendly also. We need more environmentally friendly chairs.

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  2. I love seeing the curtain pulled back to reveal the writer’s process. And I love your outdoor writing table.

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    1. McFeats's avatar mcfeats says:

      Thanks, Joe. This is much more inspiring than a stifled indoor desk.

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  3. Richard P's avatar Richard P says:

    Thanks for the insight into your writing practice, and I think the poem and painting do make a good match.

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    1. McFeats's avatar mcfeats says:

      Thanks, Richard!

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