A Desert Calling (Poem in Progress) Posted by McFeats on March 24, 2024March 26, 2024 Notes from 3/26: Make “Life unfurls” the second stanza. In third stanza, delete “than” before “human.” Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Like Loading...
The Untimely Typewriter:Daily Writings Against the Tides of Distraction 
Sounds very grounded in your new home. (I had to look up “virga.” Cool word!)
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Hi Richard. I hope you are well. It’s been a while. Learned that word from Joe VC. Virga can be pretty magical.
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Possible revision: “looking forward is moving back”
New title: Ghost Town, USA
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